Narritive writting locked in

Bula bloggers,

Over the last 3 weeks we have been writing narratives about our holidays we have been taking problems and exaggerating them to be even more breath-taking. My narrative was called Locked In my problem was that we walked into the wrong cinema. I actually said we got locked in that's where the title came from. It was an interesting narrative I really over-exaggerate it though. After we did our narrative we did '2 stars and a wish'. After that we had to grab an editing pencil and go through all the things and fix them. We had so much fun exaggerating. We also had to do a pricipice structure. The first thing we did was a hook sentence to hook the reader in. The second thing we did was the opening. The third thing we did was the climax. The last thing we did was the problem, then the solution then the moral. We did that precipice structure all the way through anyway here is my narritive.

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