Kia ora, talofa lava, bula, aloha, and hello welcome to my blog in term 1 we had worked on our narritive we got a slide show of pictures to chose from. What ever one we chose we had to write about. This is the picture I chose I described it as winter wonder land but actually wrote about a whole diffrent thing I ended up writing about developers zoos.
I like my story it is funny and people band up to work together it is just a great story. My main charectar amber the deer in the picture is like telling you what happened. I really like that they kind of feared the zoo so they would do anything to stop them. So here is the link to my narrtive. blog you later Hosanna out.
Hi Hosanna It's me Jia from Waitemata. I really like how you are explaining a little bit about your story, just enough to make the reader want to read it. I also liked your ending catchphrase" Hosanna Out". You used my ending catchphrase in it too. My ending catchphrase is " Blog you Later". Maybe next time you could make the blog post a little bit longer. If you want to check out my blog go to http://wpsjiam.blogspot.com.
ReplyDeletethank you jia for the nice blog comment
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